23.3.15 Week 5 Class 1

23.3.15

Critique, Making

Today we discussed different ways in which we could approach and create maps for our brochure, then we got critique on the work we did so far, my critique was:

Cover: 

-More interesting 'creative' sounding name

-Make subheading link with title, less dispersed

-No need to use the word art

-put the sculpture walk aspect in subheading

-Try use the windcones imagery for the front cover instead

Bucket Fountain spread:

-Make title blue

-Move body of text up

-Center icon type

-Make icon type smaller

-Make 'artist' say wellington artist in order to make a more square shape

Tripod:

-Make artist icon consist size with the rest of the brochure

-move icons down and text to the side so not obstructed by the image

-Move tripod down and make it smaller

-give map circle an orange tint

-cut out background just keep tripod and fire

Akau Tangi spread:

-Clean up imagery
-Move icons to the top, can make them horizontal does not always have to be vertical

-Move text away from imagery and move down

-work on tracking

-centre icon text

Checklist spread:

-Move city walk to the left

-Colour the circles and list type to corresponding colours

-Move trust and checklist to same line and to the left

-Make circles smaller, the same point size as writting next to it

-Move city walk down so it links with its own list not the one above it

General:

-Fix hyphens, change paragraph style

-indent instead of paragraph spaces

-centre icon text

-make it wellington artist

Changes made after given critique: