24.3.15 Class 5.2

24.3.15

Critique, Making

Today we continued developing our brochures as well as getting critique, my critique was:

Cover: 

-Make type red to tie in with the red cone

- Change type face to something more creative looking

-Get rid of underline as that is not consistent with the rest of the brochure

-Make imagery less shapely

Bucket fountain spread:

-Fix rags

-Move icons up away from being squashed at the very bottom

Tripod spread:

-Move embassy feature text more in line with title like in other spreads

-fix rags

-Move icons up  so less squished at the bottom

Akau Tangi:

-Move evans bay more in line with title

-Move icons up as it is is getting too close with imagery

Checklist:

-Change title to the same red as front cover

- Bold subheadings

-Move meridian walk in line with wellington walk 

-Make sub headings smaller

General:

-Use story and thin space to make artist info more square like and aligned

-Make artist info the same size as the icon info

-Make icon info text same size

-Make main body text 0.5pt smaller

 Improved spreads and imagery after feedback as well as an introduction/map page: